Hi, You opening is weak because you repeat yourself or state the obvious. Look at your first two sentences. The rest of your essay is reasonably well written from an English point of view.
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Bearing in mind that we contract many diseases by inhaling infected air and litter [we inhale litter?] creates the most favourable conditions for bacterium you will probably break the habit of dropping litter in streets.