The conclusion of my essay

0I need to write the reasons ,difficulties of working in China and whether i will go to China to find the job or not.02br
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00I will write one paragraph about introduction ,two reasons ,two difficulties, and in the conclusion , i will write my opinion about working in China. << Is this struture ok?02br
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00This is my conclusion:02br
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00In my opinion, I would not resist working in China .aLthough both opts have theirs own advantages and disadvantages, my determination is mainly depend on whether the job have chance to make my way out and develop my talent, but if the the chances are equal, i would rather staying and working in HK , a familar city to me.02br
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00i think there is not enough context for my conclusion,do you think so? What things can i add to my conclusion?02br
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00Is there any better paragraph to express my opinion?02br
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00Thank you.0-