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Mate Connor Posted 11 years ago
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The composition - My favourite sport

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My favourite sport is soccer, since I was very small. It's very popular sport in the world. At soccer my favourite positions are : Defender and Attacker, beacuse the have more bashing than others. There are some reasons why I like soccer. Firstly: This is for all age groups and gender groups. The second reason is the footballers and football teams, which I like and these are: Manchester United- For me this team is life and the main reason why I watch and like soccer. Sometimes, socerrs watch is more intereseting, than play in there.The footballers which I like are : Wayne Rooney, Arjen Robben and Van der Saar, this last was in Manchester United, but nowadays not - He created the new era in football history. There, why I like football - The persons and teams which is more important for watching and compassion Football.
  

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My favourite sport is soccer Soccer has been my favourite sport since I was very young. small. It's one of the most very popular sport s in the world.

  • My favourite sport is soccer Soccer has been my favourite sport since I was very young.
  • small.
  • It's one of the most very popular sport s in the world.
  • At In soccer , my favourite playing positions are d efender and striker Attacker, beacuse the y're more physically challenging have more bashing than others.
  • There are some reasons why I like soccer.
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My favourite sport is soccer Soccer has been my favourite sport since I was very young. small. It's one of the most very popular sports in the world. At In soccer, my favourite playing positions are defender and striker Attacker, beacuse they're more physically challenging
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teechrThe footballers which I like are Wayne Rooney, Arjen Robben and Van der Saar,
Hi teechr

I'm sure you overlooked 'which'. I think it should be 'whom'.
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I did overlook it. Emotion: embarrassed
Thanks tamguatlay for pointing it out.

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