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Mate Connor Posted 11 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
The composition - My favourite sport
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My favourite sport is soccer, since I was very small. It's very popular sport in the world. At soccer my favourite positions are : Defender and Attacker, beacuse the have more bashing than others. There are some reasons why I like soccer. Firstly: This is for all age groups and gender groups. The second reason is the footballers and football teams, which I like and these are: Manchester United- For me this team is life and the main reason why I watch and like soccer. Sometimes, socerrs watch is more intereseting, than play in there.The footballers which I like are : Wayne Rooney, Arjen Robben and Van der Saar, this last was in Manchester United, but nowadays not - He created the new era in football history. There, why I like football - The persons and teams which is more important for watching and compassion Football.
My favourite sport is soccer, since I was very small. It's very popular sport in the world. At soccer my favourite positions are : Defender and Attacker, beacuse the have more bashing than others. There are some reasons why I like soccer. Firstly: This is for all age groups and gender groups. The second reason is the footballers and football teams, which I like and these are: Manchester United- For me this team is life and the main reason why I watch and like soccer. Sometimes, socerrs watch is more intereseting, than play in there.The footballers which I like are : Wayne Rooney, Arjen Robben and Van der Saar, this last was in Manchester United, but nowadays not - He created the new era in football history. There, why I like football - The persons and teams which is more important for watching and compassion Football.
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My favourite sport is soccer Soccer has been my favourite sport since I was very young. small. It's one of the most very popular sport s in the world.
- My favourite sport is soccer Soccer has been my favourite sport since I was very young.
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- It's one of the most very popular sport s in the world.
- At In soccer , my favourite playing positions are d efender and striker Attacker, beacuse the y're more physically challenging have more bashing than others.
- There are some reasons why I like soccer.
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teechrThe footballers which I like are Wayne Rooney, Arjen Robben and Van der Saar,Hi teechr
I'm sure you overlooked 'which'. I think it should be 'whom'.
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