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Emcivy Posted 18 years ago
Grammar

the checking of an important email

0First of all i would like to thank anyone who checks the grammar on the email and would apreciate any advise in every aspect including format itself.02br
00As im an student in a spanish talking country I dont have the necessary knowledge to write an impecable letter, so I though of asking you guys some help ^^02br
00This is the email:02br
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00Hello, I’m [my name] student at the “Universidad de Costa Rica” (University of Costa Rica), as part of my university studies me and my research group 01u00has being02u00 assigned with the analysis of ecologic multimedia. Noticing your important contributions on this area I would be glad to have the opportunity to conduct an asynchronous online interview via email about the design, creation and distribution 01u00of ecologic multimedia02u00. 02br
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01u00Looking forward for your answer. Thank You.02u02br
00------ thats it02br
00the underlined parts are the ones i have more doubts about, just to point that out. Thanks 0-
  

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0 01pre 00 Below is my try, but probably it's not very good, so take care! Hello [addressee name], My name's [your name], and I am a student at the University of Costa Rica (I'd rather be more specific and mention my faculty/carthedra). ).

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  • 0 01pre 00 Below is my try, but probably it's not very good, so take care!
  • Hello [addressee name], My name's [your name], and I am a student at the University of Costa Rica (I'd rather be more specific and mention my faculty/carthedra).
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  • Taking into account your important contributions to this field, I would be glad to have the opportunity to conduct with you an email interview about the creation and distribution of ecologic multimedia.
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00  Below is my try, but probably it's  not  very  good,  so  take    care!      Hello [addressee name],      My name's [your name], and I am a student at the University of    Costa Rica  (I'd  rather  be  more  specific  and  mention  my    faculty/carthedra). My research group is fucused (you may  say    "have been assigned to  study...",  but  that'll  have  a  bit    bori
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0First of all thanks for helping me out.02br
00So, the new email would benow like this:02br
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00Hello [00addressee name00],02pre
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00My name’s [my name], and I’m a student of psychology at the 02br
00University of Costa Rica. My research group is focused on ecological videos.02pre
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0Dear 01font00(Not Hello)02font00[addressee name],02br
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00My name is 01font00(don't use a contraction here)02font00 [my name], and I’m a student of psychology at the University of Costa Rica. My research group is focused on ecological videos. 01font
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0-Thanks for your help, I'm not only glad for finding this forum, but also appreciate the time between your responses. I hope you keep helping others and making good karma.02br
00The actual email would now be like this, as i said last night i will send this at night so any other advice will be appreciated.02br
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00Dear [addressee name],02br
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0 Hello.02br
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00 Use "means" not "mean": «... as a means of/for popularization of science»02br
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00 And GG probably made a little typo in: «I hold your contributions...» — but I am not sure! (She wrote "I hold you your contributions...") 0-
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0Thank you, that was a typo - 01i00your contributions02i00 is correct. I had never heard divulgation - use publishing.0-
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0Once again thank you, now the email would be like this:02br
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00Dear [addressee name],02br
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00My name is [my name], and I’m a student of psychology at the University of Costa Rica. My research group is focused on ecological videos 01u00as a means of scientific publication02u00.0
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