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Ha Quynh Huong Posted 7 years ago
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The chart shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2010

The bar chart give information about how many preceptors and preceptress there are in six kinds of educational setting in England in 2010

Look at the chart, it is immediately apparent that the number of female teachers experiences an increase from nursery to university , and vice versa. To be more accurate, there is an dramatic rise in the percentage of schoolman ( up to 60% ) especially it makes up over 70 % . On the contrary, that of woman teachers goes down sharply (about 70%) particularly occupies nearly 30 %

In general, according to aforementioned figures, most of schoolmaster concentrate on university and schoolmistress focus on nursery

  

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Ha Quynh Huong preceptors and preceptress These are not common words in England or the rest of the UK. Many people will be unfamiliar with them. It would be better to replace them with more common words.

  • Ha Quynh Huong preceptors and preceptress These are not common words in England or the rest of the UK.
  • Many people will be unfamiliar with them.
  • It would be better to replace them with more common words.
  • Ha Quynh Huong schoolman The meaning of this is unclear.
  • You should explain it.
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Ha Quynh Huongpreceptors and preceptress

These are not common words in England or the rest of the UK. Many people will be unfamiliar with them. It would be better to replace them with more common words.

Ha Quynh Huongschoolman

The meaning of this is unclear. You should explain it.

Ha Quynh Huon
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Ha Quynh Huongthe number of female teachers experiences an increase from nursery to university ,

Don't leave a space before punctuation.


Based on your photo, it's clear that you need to write decreased

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