The bar chart give information about how many preceptors and preceptress there are in six kinds of educational setting in England in 2010
Look at the chart, it is immediately apparent that the number of female teachers experiences an increase from nursery to university , and vice versa. To be more accurate, there is an dramatic rise in the percentage of schoolman ( up to 60% ) especially it makes up over 70 % . On the contrary, that of woman teachers goes down sharply (about 70%) particularly occupies nearly 30 %
In general, according to aforementioned figures, most of schoolmaster concentrate on university and schoolmistress focus on nursery
Ha Quynh Huong preceptors and preceptress These are not common words in England or the rest of the UK. Many people will be unfamiliar with them. It would be better to replace them with more common words.
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Ha Quynh Huongpreceptors and preceptress
These are not common words in England or the rest of the UK. Many people will be unfamiliar with them. It would be better to replace them with more common words.
Ha Quynh Huongschoolman
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Ha Quynh Huongthe number of female teachers experiences an increase from nursery to university ,
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