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Mimimi09 Posted 5 years ago
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The chart below shows the places visited by different people living in Australia. A glance at the bar chart reveals the percentage of various Australians visited zoo, library, theatre, and cinema. Ostensibly, the new migrants born in...

The given bar chart shows the proportion of three kind of visitors (born in Australia; new migrants born in English-speaking countries, and new migrants born in other countries) came to different places in Australia.

Overall, Cinema was by far the most popular place to visit by the three mentioned elements

To begin with, cinema is considered the most popular place in Australia, with 70% and 65% people born in Australia and new migrants born in English-speaking countries show interest. In contrast, only a small proportion of Australians went to the theatre regularly, at around 20%, about three times less than that at the cinema. New migrants who were born in other countries, tend to have the least interest in spending time at the theatre, which only has 10%.

In contrast to the theatre, new migrants from other countries seemed to enjoy themselves at the library, approximately 55%. Meanwhile, the number of people who were born in Australia and new migrants in English-speaking countries interest in visiting the zoo was 41% and 50% respectively, much higher than the number of people who like visiting the zoo

  

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