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Anita_a Posted 21 years ago

The Castle Of Love

0 The castle of love 02br
00Is so far away 02br
00I took a breath so deep 02br
00I want the passion of the kings 02br
00And the love to share 02br
00Into the greenery of the woods 02br
00By the brook of love 02br
00The mountains are witness 02br
00And the clouds my companion 02br
00As I walk with my sword 02br
00Of eternal time 02br
00To kill a prince 02br
00With my glances of affection 02br
00I think but of tomorrow 02br
00When the vibrant 02br
00And colourful World 02br
00Will all be mine. 0-
  

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0 That's an interesting one, Anita! Somewhere between a fairy tale and Blake, in its images. 02br 02br 00I was wondering about the rhythm of the last 3 lines: it seems to change slightly.

— MrPedantic

  • 0 That's an interesting one, Anita!
  • Somewhere between a fairy tale and Blake, in its images.
  • 02br 02br 00I was wondering about the rhythm of the last 3 lines: it seems to change slightly.
  • Do you think 'When the vibrant/And colourful World' could be compressed into one line?
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0 That's an interesting one, Anita! Somewhere between a fairy tale and Blake, in its images. 02br
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00I was wondering about the rhythm of the last 3 lines: it seems to change slightly. Do you think 'When the vibrant/And colourful World' could be compressed into one line? (e.g. 'When the colours of the world...', or 'When the colourful World', or something similar.) 02br
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0 Anita, sounds like a place we would all like to be. Peaceful and alive. 0-
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0 Thanks Mr. P.Wow, I didn't know that it sounded like Blake... Would u believe it... I wrote that inspired by a painting! 02br
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00Thanks Tryst! Wish we had such a world! Thanks for your encouragement. 02br
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00The castle of love 02br
00Is so far away 02br
00I took a breath so deep 02br
00I want the passion of
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