0
Sundarnaz Posted 8 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

The bird

Please read through the paragraph and make correction where you find mistakes.

Thanks.

It was sad because it had flown far away from home. As it was dark, it could not see its way back home.

Can anyone say this in a shorter way, please?

  

Top answer

sundarnaz Please read through the paragraph It's hardly a paragraph. It's just a couple of sentences. sundarnaz It was sad because it had flown far away from home.

  • sundarnaz Please read through the paragraph It's hardly a paragraph.
  • It's just a couple of sentences.
  • sundarnaz It was sad because it had flown far away from home.
  • Is the first "it" a dummy subject, or is it a reference to the bird?
  • sundarnaz As it was dark, it could not see its way back home.
Free · every Monday

Get the Weekly English Kit 📬

New words, one handy idiom, and a 2-minute quiz — delivered to your inbox to keep your streak alive.

1 Answers
0
sundarnazPlease read through the paragraph

It's hardly a paragraph. It's just a couple of sentences.

sundarnazIt was sad because it had flown far away from home.

Is the first "it" a dummy subject, or is it a reference to the bird?

sundarnazAs it was dark, it could not see its way back ho

Related Questions