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Jackson6612 Posted 17 years ago
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The biggest enemy of man is his own self and to win over it he has to defeat himself

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The biggest enemy of man is his own self and to win over it he has to defeat himself; in the process he will hurt himself and each time he does it the feeling of pain will become less but the courage will get more with every victory. Out of this process a real man will be born who will be free of his own self.
  

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A couple of suggestions: The biggest enemy of man is his own self and to win over it he has to defeat himself; in the process he will hurt himself but each time he is victorious the feeling of pain [or just "his pain"] will lessen and his courage will grow with every victory . Out of this process a real man will be born who will be free of his own self.

— Mr Wordy

  • A couple of suggestions: The biggest enemy of man is his own self and to win over it he has to defeat himself; in the process he will hurt himself but each time he is victorious the feeling of pain [or just "his pain"] will lessen and his courage will grow with every victory .
  • Out of this process a real man will be born who will be free of his own self.
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The biggest enemy of man is his own self and to win over it he has to defeat himself; in the process he will hurt himself but each time he is victorious the feeling of pain [or just "his pain"] will lessen and his courage will grow with every victory. Out of this process a real man will be born who wi
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Mr WordyA couple of suggestions:
The biggest enemy of man is his own self and to win over it he has to defeat himself; in the process he will hurt himself but each time he is victorious the feeling of pain [or just "his pain"] will lessen and his courage will grow. Out of this process a real man
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