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R1s8k Posted 5 years ago
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The best way to say this sentence for master's admission email

Hi,


What's the best way to say this sentence, which I want to use in my graduate email admission for department faculty.

"I'm searching for admission for a master's program in electrical engineering." My concern is that I used "for" two times before and after "admission" word. 1. Is the sentence correct in this form ?2. Are there better ways to say it ?
  

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" That does not make sense. Is the admission lost? Maybe you want to say: I would like to apply for admission to the Master's program in Electrical Engineering.

  • " That does not make sense.
  • Is the admission lost?
  • Maybe you want to say: I would like to apply for admission to the Master's program in Electrical Engineering.
  • I am searching for a university that offers a Master's Degree in Electrical Engineering.
  • )
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r1s8k"I'm searching for admission for a master's program in electrical engineering."

That does not make sense. Is the admission lost?

Maybe you want to say:

I would like to apply for admission to the Master's program in Electrical Engineering.
I am searching for a university that offers a Master's Degree in Electrical Engineering. (But Goog

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