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Xmagedo Posted 15 years ago
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The best advntage of technology...help with essay.
What is the best advantage that the technology brought to us ?
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Technology has big influence in our lives. It helped us to learn about various things, such as, geography, geology and math . It had made our lives easy in the last decades. It is there in our daily lives, it is there in our homes and it is there when we work. Technology is everywhere. However, the best advantage that the technology brought to us is the internet. It had contributed highly in our education positively. The following example will illustrate my point.
People became open minded even in conservatives communities with the help of the internet technology that had entered in our lives. They can find a certain information in instant and keep track with the world current events. As an example, when there is an information that takes long to find it in many books, we can easily look it up in the internet and find it in a short period of time. It may sound irrelevant but internet technology has the truths about everything in the world, economically and politically. Sometimes what we read in the newspaper or watch it on T.V is not completely the truth . In other words, computer technology tells different information from different resources that are trusted. Such as, wiki leaks, wiki travel...etc. In which helped us to learn more. Let me tell you this short story about how I learned and improved through computer technology. One time I wanted to improve my math skills and I was wondering what could be the best solution. I though of buying a book that might help to develop meself more in math. Finally, I looked up a book in the internet and I found this book with reviews from different users, and I felt that this book will be the right choice for me. I also improved in English, and I learned how to write essies correctly and use the right words in the right context. I gained different knowledge from reading different articles in the internet.
Therefore, I believe that the internet technology is the best advantage that technology brought to us. It had improved us educationlly and globally.
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Pleas make suggestion if there are any sentences that need to be rewrite.
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Technology has big influence in our lives. It helped us to learn about various things, such as, geography, geology and math . It had made our lives easy in the last decades. It is there in our daily lives, it is there in our homes and it is there when we work. Technology is everywhere. However, the best advantage that the technology brought to us is the internet. It had contributed highly in our education positively. The following example will illustrate my point.
People became open minded even in conservatives communities with the help of the internet technology that had entered in our lives. They can find a certain information in instant and keep track with the world current events. As an example, when there is an information that takes long to find it in many books, we can easily look it up in the internet and find it in a short period of time. It may sound irrelevant but internet technology has the truths about everything in the world, economically and politically. Sometimes what we read in the newspaper or watch it on T.V is not completely the truth . In other words, computer technology tells different information from different resources that are trusted. Such as, wiki leaks, wiki travel...etc. In which helped us to learn more. Let me tell you this short story about how I learned and improved through computer technology. One time I wanted to improve my math skills and I was wondering what could be the best solution. I though of buying a book that might help to develop meself more in math. Finally, I looked up a book in the internet and I found this book with reviews from different users, and I felt that this book will be the right choice for me. I also improved in English, and I learned how to write essies correctly and use the right words in the right context. I gained different knowledge from reading different articles in the internet.
Therefore, I believe that the internet technology is the best advantage that technology brought to us. It had improved us educationlly and globally.
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Pleas make suggestion if there are any sentences that need to be rewrite.
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Hi Abdul I don't want to add anything, I just want to say 1- "a certain information" can be replaced by "certain information". 2- "There is an information" can be replaced by "There is information" 3- "meself", "essies" and "educationlly" are misspelled.
- Hi Abdul I don't want to add anything, I just want to say 1- "a certain information" can be replaced by "certain information".
- 2- "There is an information" can be replaced by "There is information" 3- "meself", "essies" and "educationlly" are misspelled.
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Hi Abdul
I don't want to add anything, I just want to say
1- "a certain information" can be replaced by "certain information".
2- "There is an information" can be replaced by "There is information"
3- "meself", "essies" and "educationlly" are misspelled.
I don't want to add anything, I just want to say
1- "a certain information" can be replaced by "certain information".
2- "There is an information" can be replaced by "There is information"
3- "meself", "essies" and "educationlly" are misspelled.
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