The bar graph compares the input from three sectors into British economy in the twentieth century.
At the first glance, it is evident that the contributions made by agriculture and manufacturing sides were tremendous in the earlier half of the century; however, as the years progressed business and finance became the predominant pillar of the British economy.
In the year 1900, the most significant contribution of approximately 50% was made my agriculture department, this was succeeded by manufacturing sector which had an input of around 45%. While, business and finance had a share of mere 3%. After fifty years, the support to economy from agriculture segment grew to around 53%, whereas, that from manufacturing department fell to about 37%. However, share by the business and finance mounted about two folds to 8%.
In the later part of the century, that is in the year 1975, the input from agriculture side dropped dramatically to 10%. Same was the case with manufacturing which saw a decline of 4%, albeit not as significant as agriculture sector. Nevertheless, business and finance was the only segment where improvement was noticed. At the end of the 20th century, agriculture sector had an input of only about 3%, while, that from manufacturing it was approximately 15%. The only area that continued to grow was business and finance which finally had a contribution of about 35%.
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