The line graph compares the amout of carbon dioxide emissions which produced by people in four different countries over a period of 40 years. The amout of carbon dioxide emissions per person in united kingdom and sweden declined significantly. While, the carbon dioxide output from italy and portugal increased during the period shown. It is clear that, during over a period of 40 years, united kingdom was the biggest production. In 1967, people in united kingdom produced around 12 tonnes carbon dioxide. Next was sweden, with emissions around 9 tonnes. While, the carbon dioxide emissions which produced by people in italy and portugal was around 5 tonnes and 1 tonnes respectively. Over the following 10 years, the carbon dioxide output from united kingdom fell to about 11 tonnes. WHile, the remaining three countries rose to some 11 tonnes, 7 tonnes and 2 tonnes respectively. Between 1977 and 2007, people in united kingdom's emissions production also decreased to just around 7 tonnes. And at sweden too, emissions output dropped to only 6 tonnes. By constrast, the amount of carbon dioxide emissions in italy and portugal climed considerably to approximately 6 tonnes respectively.
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