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The Autumn’s Splendour

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The Autumn’s Splendour

Can anyone buy time?
Can anyone hold the moment longer?
So that it’s far from the moment we separate? Though it’s near...
Though it’s slipping in silently without fear...
I’m fear to separate..
I’m afraid my tears will flow a river out... At the moment we know we no longer can hold...

No one can buy the time we spend together
No one can...

It is precious than our fight
It is wonderful than our misunderstanding
It is like the moment we look how hard the cloud,
trying to stand still against the mighty wind..
It is a wonderful blue sky...
It is a glamorous dance of the evening...

I am desperate to dwell in your safe wings of arm
Where the touch of love is warmly unleash
Where it is the best hug in the world
Without any worries
Without any judgments

We can never hold what we want at times...
But I believe the moment will come,
where we can hug one another again
and in tears of joy, this round.

The wind represent my voice
It whisper my tears and bring them to the place I never knew
So that they will not stay in my eyes
But let the joy remains

We will never be apart
Because we belongs together in heart
We will surely meet again my dears

From: a voice of a child, to the short moment with beloved parents in physical distances of seas
For my beloved sister, Max Xin.
  

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A few suggestions: The Autumn’s Splendour Can anyone buy time? Can anyone hold this moment longer so that it’s far from the moment we separate? Though it’s near, Though it’s slipping in silently without fear, I fear to separate.

  • A few suggestions: The Autumn’s Splendour Can anyone buy time?
  • Can anyone hold this moment longer so that it’s far from the moment we separate?
  • Though it’s near, Though it’s slipping in silently without fear, I fear to separate.
  • I’m afraid my tears will flow out in a river.
  • At the moment we know we no longer can hold.
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A few suggestions:

The Autumn’s Splendour

Can anyone buy time?
Can anyone hold this moment longer
so that it’s far from the moment we separate?
Though it’s near,
Though it’s slipping in silently without fear,
I fear to separate.
I’m afraid my tears will flow out in a river.
At the moment we kno

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