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Sundarnaz Posted 8 years ago
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The angel in 'Abou Ben Adham'

Question:

Describe the angel in the poem 'Abou Ben Adham'.

Answer:

The angel in the poem 'Abou Ben Adham' is a peaceful creature. His peaceful presence makes Abou Ben Adham bold enough to ask what he was writing in the book of gold. It answered his question with a look of all sweet accord. On his second visit, it appears with a halo of great light that awakes Abou Ben Adham.

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The angel in the poem 'Abou Ben Adham' is a peaceful creature. His peaceful presence makes Abou Ben Adham bold enough to ask what the angel was writing in the book of gold. The angel answered his question with a look of total (or complete) sweet accord.

  • The angel in the poem 'Abou Ben Adham' is a peaceful creature.
  • His peaceful presence makes Abou Ben Adham bold enough to ask what the angel was writing in the book of gold.
  • The angel answered his question with a look of total (or complete) sweet accord.
  • On his second visit, the angel appears with a halo of great light that awakes Abou Ben Adham.
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The angel in the poem 'Abou Ben Adham' is a peaceful creature. His peaceful presence makes Abou Ben Adham bold enough to ask what the angel was writing in the book of gold. The angel answered his question with a look of total (or complete) sweet accord. On his second visit, the angel appears with a halo of great light that awakes Abou Ben Adham.

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