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Park sang joon Posted 9 years ago
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Alan Wake is a psychological horror action-adventure video game developed by Remedy Entertainment and published by Microsoft Studios, released for the Xbox 360 and Microsoft Windows. The story follows best-selling thriller novelist Alan Wake, as he tries to uncover the mystery behind his wife's disappearance during a vacation in the small fictional town of Bright Falls, Washington, all while experiencing events from the plot in his latest novel, which he cannot remember writing, coming to life.
<Alan Wake from WikiPedia https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Alan_Wake>
I'd like to know if I can rephrase the underlined clause to the following.
He tries to uncover the mystery while He experiences events from the plot in his latest novel, which he cannot remember writing, and his latest novel comes to life.
* "And his latest novel comes to life" belongs to the while clause.
Thank you in advance for your help.
<Alan Wake from WikiPedia https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Alan_Wake>
I'd like to know if I can rephrase the underlined clause to the following.
He tries to uncover the mystery while He experiences events from the plot in his latest novel, which he cannot remember writing, and his latest novel comes to life.
* "And his latest novel comes to life" belongs to the while clause.
Thank you in advance for your help.
Top answer
Yes, you have the right idea, though you have shifted the focus with your paraphrase.
- Yes, you have the right idea, though you have shifted the focus with your paraphrase.
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Yes, you have the right idea, though you have shifted the focus with your paraphrase.
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