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Park sang joon Posted 11 years ago
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The analyses of the convoluted text.

The following explains about the weakness of the distributed computing.

The impacts of trust and availability on performance and development difficulty can influence the choice of whether to deploy onto a dedicated cluster, to idle machines internal to the developing organization, or to an open external network of volunteers or contractors. In many cases, the participating nodes must trust the central system not to abuse the access that is being granted, by interfering with the operation of other programs, mangling stored information, transmitting private data, or creating new security holes. Other systems employ measures to reduce the amount of trust “client” nodes must place in the central system such as placing applications in virtual machines.
<Source: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Grid_computing>

1. I think the like of "PC" has been omitted after "deploy."
2. I think "to idle machines internal to the developing organization" is the inserted adverbial to-infinitive phrase.
3. I think "by" should have been used, not "such as."
I'd like to know whether or not my guesses are right.
Thank you in advance for your help.
  

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park sang joon 1. " No. There is nothing missing.

  • park sang joon 1.
  • " No.
  • There is nothing missing.
  • park sang joon 2.
  • I think "to idle machines internal to the developing organization" is the inserted adverbial to-infinitive phrase.
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park sang joon1. I think the like of "PC" has been omitted after "deploy."
No. There is nothing missing.
park sang joon2. I think "to idle machines internal to the developing organization" is the inserted adverbial to-infinitive phrase.
No. It is the second prepositional phrase in a series of prepositional phrases.
Deplo
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Thank you, AlpheccaStars, for your very helpful, kind answer. Emotion: smile

No. There is nothing missing.
Then I
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park sang joonThen I'd like to know what the system deploy.
Deploy is a verb.
The implied object is "the application."

We deploy (the application) onto a cluster of machines.
park sang joonI'd like to know whether "such as" modifies "Other systems."
No. "Such as" here means "for example."
It refers to

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