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Park sang joon Posted 11 years ago
Grammar

The analyses of a text.

Gold-setting theory suggests that employees are motivated to achieve goals they and their managers establish together. The goal should be very specific, moderately difficult, and one the employee will be committed to achieve.
[Source: Reading for Results Ninth Edition by Laraine Flemming]
I think "to achieve" indicates conditional, and if the author complied with "parallel relationship" that he or she should have written "of being one," not "one."
And I'd like to know if my assumptions are right.
Thank you in advance for your help.
  

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The quoted text is entirely correct as written (but it should be goal-setting rather than gold-setting). This is not a conditional or parallel situation. Your correction would make the text ungrammatical.

  • The quoted text is entirely correct as written (but it should be goal-setting rather than gold-setting).
  • This is not a conditional or parallel situation.
  • Your correction would make the text ungrammatical.
  • The word "one" in the text means "the goal," but in a more abstract sense.
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The quoted text is entirely correct as written (but it should be goal-setting rather than gold-setting). This is not a conditional or parallel situation. Your correction would make the text ungrammatical. The word "one" in the text means "the goal," but in a more abstract sense.

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