The Almighty’s Gift: Creativity
Good Evening! I am trying to write a sonnet. I want to have the sonnet professionally framed, so please let me know what suggestions and corrections you have for my sonnet. Also, please review the punctuation of the poem. Thank you for all of your help!
The Almighty’s Gift: Creativity
Let me take thee on a magical trip
As our journey is bound by no extent
Thou God, we don’t possess any kinship
Yet this gift you gave, we have no resent
Creativity is a divine trait
And can’t be stopped in the battle of the mind
Those with equal power, end in stalemate
But this talent is a gift, to mankind
Together we’re kids of the almighty
As a creativity, is god gifted
But our soul makes us different, precisely
We’re here to make our ideas vivid
For we are the leaders of the future
And we paint our lives just like a picture
Top answer
A few of your lines have too many syllables and the meter is mostly wrong, though your rhyme scheme is pretty good. Most of the time you're writing trochaic pentameter. / _ | / _ | / _ | / _ | / _ This makes each line end with an unstressed syllable, which is very strange for a sonnet.
- A few of your lines have too many syllables and the meter is mostly wrong, though your rhyme scheme is pretty good.
- Most of the time you're writing trochaic pentameter.
- / _ | / _ | / _ | / _ | / _ This makes each line end with an unstressed syllable, which is very strange for a sonnet.
- You'd do better to use the standard iambic pentameter, ending every line with a stressed syllable.
- _ / | _ / | _ / | _ / | _ / The style is slightly inconsistent.
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A few of your lines have too many syllables and the meter is mostly wrong, though your rhyme scheme is pretty good.
Most of the time you're writing trochaic pentameter. / _ | / _ | / _ | / _ | / _ This makes each line end with an unstressed syllable, which is very strange for a sonnet. You'd do better to use the standard iambic pentameter, ending eve
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