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Anon f8r Posted 18 years ago
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"That's why the security arrangements that we're discussing to be done jointly are very important to the future not just to Nigeria and the peace there but also to the world energy market."

"That's why the security arrangements that we're discussing to be done jointly are very important to the future not just to Nigeria and the peace there but also to the world energy market."
This sentence sounds very weird to me.
"discussing to be done jointly"?
"and the peace there"?
Please edit it. Thank you.
  

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Hongkie"That's why the joint security arrangements that we're discussing to be done jointly are very important to the future - not just to for Nigeria and the peace there , but also to for the world energy market."
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Thank you very much, Avangi.
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