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Anonymous Posted 7 years ago
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Is this correct? Do we need a comma between CGI and about?


It's a movie that uses a lot of CGI about some dude stranded in the desert and managing to get out alive.

  

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anonymous Is this correct? Sort of not. You have shoehorned "that uses a lot of CGI" in there *****-nilly.

  • anonymous Is this correct?
  • Sort of not.
  • You have shoehorned "that uses a lot of CGI" in there *****-nilly.
  • If you can stand the breathless inanity that lends, then you're OK.
  • anonymous Do we need a comma between CGI and about?
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anonymousIs this correct?

Sort of not. You have shoehorned "that uses a lot of CGI" in there *****-nilly. If you can stand the breathless inanity that lends, then you're OK.

anonymousDo we need a comma between CGI and about?

A comma would only make things worse. You need two sentences.

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