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JimmyH Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

that would otherwise not be..

Using mirrors allow us to capture the rays that would otherwise not be captured.

It's an oddly worded sentence so need some suggestions of making it more concise and easy to understand.
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Mirrors allow us to capture all the / more rays.

  • Mirrors allow us to capture all the / more rays.
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Mirrors allow us to capture all the / more rays.
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Thanks Emotion: smile just wondering if this fragment below is right or if not, how would you put it so that it doesn't have any grammatical error
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It's just fine the way it is.
I thought you wanted something much shorter.

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