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Ahn Posted 19 years ago
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'that was the time when....'

1b00Besides representative democracy spread and mass politics appeared at that time.02b02br
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00so does this make sense?02br
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01b00Besides that was the time when representative democracy spread and mass politics appeared02b02br
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00Or are there any other good expressions?02br
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I don't know what you wanted to say but I'd personally take the besides part out so that was the time when representative democracy spread and mass politics appeared

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I don't know what you wanted to say but I'd personally take the besides part out so

that was the time when representative democracy spread and mass politics appeared

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