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Supercat Posted 9 years ago
Grammar

That-relative (with be) vs Comma?

A business will focus on those activities that are likely to generate a surplus.

A business will focus on those activities, likely to generate a surplus.

Is the second somewhat impossible? Does it sound like the business will focus on, and thus it may generate a surplus?

  

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Hi, I would not say your second sentence is impossible. However, #1 does seem different in meaning from #2 in my opinion. A business will focus on those activities that are likely to generate a surplus.

  • Hi, I would not say your second sentence is impossible.
  • However, #1 does seem different in meaning from #2 in my opinion.
  • A business will focus on those activities that are likely to generate a surplus.
  • Meaning: I think that paraphrasing is redundant here.
  • It means exactly what it says.
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Hi,

I would not say your second sentence is impossible. However, #1 does seem different in meaning from #2 in my opinion.


A business will focus on those activities that are likely to generate a surplus.

Meaning: I think that paraphrasing is redundant here. It means exactly what it says.



A business will

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