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Thanksgiving

0 00Let’s go back to the year 1620. A group of pilgrims 00 had just come over from England because they were punished for their strict religious beliefs 00 there. They thought 010200 would give them a chance to start a new life. They arrived in America on their ship, the Mayflower .00 Their first year in 010200 was really difficult. They couldn’t find food. Nearly half of the 102 people, who first came over, were dead by the next fall. But in 1621, things started to look better. They had a huge harvest with a ton of food. To celebrate 00, they held a huge feast 00and invited a group of Indians who had helped the Pilgrims get through that first difficult year. It was quite a party — three days of various birds, fish, fruit, and vegetables. That was the first Thanksgiving. 00 0-
  

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02br 01i 00It looks OK to me, except for a big P and a couple of commas:02i 02br 02br 00Let’s go back to the year 1620. A group of 01b 00P02b 00ilgrims 00had just come over from England because they were punished for their strict religious beliefs 00there. They thought America would give them a chance to start a new life.

  • 02br 01i 00It looks OK to me, except for a big P and a couple of commas:02i 02br 02br 00Let’s go back to the year 1620.
  • A group of 01b 00P02b 00ilgrims 00had just come over from England because they were punished for their strict religious beliefs 00there.
  • They thought America would give them a chance to start a new life.
  • 00 Their first year in America was really difficult.
  • They couldn’t find food.
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00Let’s go back to the year 1620. A group of 01b00P02b00ilgrims 00had just come over from England because they were punished for their strict religious beliefs 00there. They thought America would give them a chance to start a new lif

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