Thank you for accepting me as a new friend. I would like to improve my English, then be able to help those who need to impmprove their English. Please correct my letter and tell me what should I do to write better letter. Best regard, Farshid
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Dear Farshid, Welcome to the group. Your letter is very nice. Write again and ask for help as you need it.
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Dear Farshid, Welcome to the group.
Your letter is very nice.
Write again and ask for help as you need it.
Since you asked, I'll point out a detail or two in your letter.
), you should say it like this: Please correct my letter and tell me what I should do to write better letters.
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Welcome to the group. Your letter is very nice. Write again and ask for help as you need it. Since you asked, I'll point out a detail or two in your letter. In your last sentence (Please correct my letter and tell me what should I do to write better letter.), you should say it like this:
Please correct my letter and tell me what I should do to write better le