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Meg2589 Posted 22 years ago
Letter Writing

Thanks letter?

I have to write a thanks letter to a company after every profitable deal. It is not a formal letter. It is just a simple and friendly mail. But I always start my thanks letter (mail) like this "Thank you very much for this kindness. or I am thankful to you for ....." etc. etc.. I feel it should be different. I want to write something else to thank the company.

Could anybody please suggest me a few more lines showing the same meaning?

Thanks!
  

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Hi Meg, "Thank you very much for this kindness" sounds odd to me. I would have to see you whole letter to comment further. Thank you very much for your business.

  • Hi Meg, "Thank you very much for this kindness" sounds odd to me.
  • I would have to see you whole letter to comment further.
  • Thank you very much for your business.
  • MountainHiker
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Hi Meg,

"Thank you very much for this kindness" sounds odd to me.

I would have to see you whole letter to comment further.

But off the cuff, I would say...Thank you very much for your business.


MountainHiker

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Dear MountainHiker,

Thanks for your help!

Could you please help me here? Where is the use of "Thank you very much for this kindness" appropriate?

As I wrote earlier, I write only a simple mail. Sometimes I work from home for a company. But I am not an employee of that company. Whenever I receive my salary or any other benefit, I send a thanks mail to the company. I
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Hi Meg2589,

"Thank you very much for this kindness."

To be honest, I never use that phrase. "Kindness" seems limp to me. Whatever represented the kindness is what I like to give thanks for. Thank you for your business. Thank you for your letter. Thank you for your invitation. That you for your concern about X.

If your letters are appreciated, then there is no n

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