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Antonycc Posted 15 years ago
Letter Writing
Thanking all bosses on receipt of bonus
Hi,
Request you all to please help me out in correcting the following letter which I have drafted.
This is basically to thank all the company bosses from all the staff who received bonus,
Dear Mr.X, Mr.Y & Mr.Z
We all ABC company staff would like to sincerely thank you for recent bonus we received. We would also like to thank you for the expression of faith in our abilities that this bonus demonstrates. We assure you that we will do our best not to disappoint you and that we will always try our hardest to add value to our company.
Thanks & Regards,
Request you all to please help me out in correcting the following letter which I have drafted.
This is basically to thank all the company bosses from all the staff who received bonus,
Dear Mr.X, Mr.Y & Mr.Z
We all ABC company staff would like to sincerely thank you for recent bonus we received. We would also like to thank you for the expression of faith in our abilities that this bonus demonstrates. We assure you that we will do our best not to disappoint you and that we will always try our hardest to add value to our company.
Thanks & Regards,
Top answer
I would refrain from using the ampersand character so freely in your letters (unless you are working in a hip-hop industry or some other fun domain). -- Dear Mr. X, Mr.
- I would refrain from using the ampersand character so freely in your letters (unless you are working in a hip-hop industry or some other fun domain).
- -- Dear Mr.
- X, Mr.
- Y, and Mr.
- Z, On behalf of the ABC company's staff, I would like to sincerely thank you for the recent bonuses we received.
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I would refrain from using the ampersand character so freely in your letters (unless you are working in a hip-hop industry or some other fun domain).
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Dear Mr. X, Mr. Y, and Mr. Z,
On behalf of the ABC company's staff, I would like to sincerely thank you for the recent bonuses we received. We are grateful for your recognition and appreciation of our abilities and effo
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Dear Mr. X, Mr. Y, and Mr. Z,
On behalf of the ABC company's staff, I would like to sincerely thank you for the recent bonuses we received. We are grateful for your recognition and appreciation of our abilities and effo
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