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Anonymous Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

Thank-you note and signature

Is it ok to ask you guys to proof-read this small thank-you note? It's for an author who came to my country and gave a few interviews about her charity organization and book. I'm particularly baffled by the last line... I don't know how to express the meaning that the note is from all the employees of my company. Emotion: tongue tied

A warm thank-you for visiting [cityname] April 17th – 19th 2013! Journalists, literature enthusiasts and we hosts were tremendously impressed. We wish you, [charityname] and, in particular, your cause the best possible success now and in the future.

Team [companyname]

Any points on grammar/vocab/fluency are more than welcome! Emotion: smile
  

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It's OK. You could consider ending with ' From all of us here at [company name]' Clive

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It's OK. You could consider ending with 'From all of us here at [company name]'

Clive
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Journalists, literature enthusiasts, and we, your hosts, were tremendously impressed. We wish (charity name) the best possible success.

Shorter is better!
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