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Anonymous Posted 20 years ago
Letter Writing

Thank you letter to my boss

I was working at a car dealership as the lease terminations manager for a while..when i first started i knew absolutely nothing. Now i'm moving on (in the same industry) to something bigger and better. I just want to thank my boss for giving me the chance to work at such a great place where i was able to learn and apply what i learned towards my new job. I just feel that what i wrote is too dry.

here's what i wrote.

Dear Lydia,

I would like to take this opportunity to express my heartfelt thanks to you for giving me the oportunity to work at Gus Machado Ford. I really appreciated the time that I spent working with you on both a professional and personal level. I certainly learned a lot about the unique aspects of customer service and sales in the car industry.

i wish you, the department, and Gus Machado Ford continued succes.
  

Top answer

Hi, It seems OK to me. jiust made a couple of minor revisions. Best wishes, Clive Dear Lydia, I would like to take this opportunity to express my heartfelt thanks to you for giving me the opportunity to work at Gus Machado Ford.

  • Hi, It seems OK to me.
  • jiust made a couple of minor revisions.
  • Best wishes, Clive Dear Lydia, I would like to take this opportunity to express my heartfelt thanks to you for giving me the opportunity to work at Gus Machado Ford.
  • I really appreciate the time that I spent working with you, on both a professional and personal level.
  • I have certainly learned a lot about the unique aspects of customer service and sales in the car industry.
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Hi,

It seems OK to me. jiust made a couple of minor revisions.

Best wishes, Clive

Dear Lydia,

I would like to take this opportunity to express my heartfelt thanks to you for giving me the opportunity to work at Gus Machado Ford. I really appreciate the time that I spent working with you, on both a professional
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Hi,

I graduated last week and I want to write an appreciation letter to my boss for allowing me attend classes in the evening.
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I wish for continued success.

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