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Adonis Posted 21 years ago
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Although Ichiro Suzuki has been a star player in Japan, he still needs to overcome a large of challenges including different culture, different language, and advanced skill in baseball before standing on stage of MLB. Therefore, if I could meet him, I would like to ask what he did can achieve these goals in baseball games. In other words, I would like to know what kinds of his tips to success. I think it is his tip that helps me surmount many difficulties in my life. After all, some people used a metaphor, baseball, to describe a real life. Only through realizing Ichiro Suzuki’s tip in baseball games, can I hit a home run of my life.
  
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