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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
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Thank you for Job Offer

It was pleasure speaking with you. I appreciate the time you took to interview me. I am very interested in working for you.



I am eager to bring my experience in Recruiting, Sourcing, Accounts Management and Vendor Management knowledge. I am convinced the knowledge, skills, and experience I've already achieved make me the best candidate for the job.





I wish to thank you again for your courtesy and look forward.

  

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Hi Anon - the first 3 sentences are very choppy and sound rather stilted. It was pleasure speaking with you. I appreciate the time you took to interview me.

  • Hi Anon - the first 3 sentences are very choppy and sound rather stilted.
  • It was pleasure speaking with you.
  • I appreciate the time you took to interview me.
  • I am very interested in working for you.
  • I am eager to bring my experience in r ecruiting, s ourcing, account Management and Vendor Management knowledge to the job .
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Hi Anon - the first 3 sentences are very choppy and sound rather stilted.

It was pleasure speaking with you. I appreciate the time you took to interview me. I am very interested in working for you.

I am eager to bring my experience in recruiting, sourcing, account Management and Vendor Management knowledge to the job. I am convinced the

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