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This is my selfintroducyion
If you find something wrong in my title , please, help to correct. Thank you very much
Hi! Everybody, my name is eva. I am interested in tralveling around the country. I am fond of appreciating local cultures and special tribe’s characteristics. I am eager that I want to works as a traveling reporter.
I will graduate from the?? university. My major is journalism. Some professors teach me how to rethink unfair thing in society and cultivate the ability of critical thinking. The reason why I pay close attention to observe non-mainstream cultures. I try to approach the way of aborigine’s life- regionalism,and understand what traditional values of aboriginal tribes are. Therefore, a traveling reporter is the foremost job that I want to do after graduation.
In this summer vacation, I got two chances to gain much information about aborigine. I worked as a practical journalist in department of aborigine on public television. I took advantage of this opportunity of adapting the aboriginal life. I arrive in Dulan tribe of Taitung in July. This is an extremely warm Amis tribe. I was very keen on participating their sacrificial rates called Kiruma. It means some aborigines will return to their tribe. They celebrate and revel for three days. I stayed at Dulan temporarily on a journey several days. I found I could not only get along with the local inhabitants but also felt their innocent and warm spirit without any selfishness. They identify their traditional cultures. I have been attracted to their traditional cultures. That small tribe contains natural atmosphere affect me deeply.
Although their residential hometown has been polluted by visitors and businessman, all aborigines who live in Dulan still think Taiwan is a wonderful landscapes to live. I find it difficult to prevent their residential hometown from visitor and businessman. However, If I have the opportunity of being a traveling reporter in the near future, I will devote myself to writing copious articles and urging people to protect aboriginal tribe’s land.
If you find something wrong in my title , please, help to correct. Thank you very much
Hi! Everybody, my name is eva. I am interested in tralveling around the country. I am fond of appreciating local cultures and special tribe’s characteristics. I am eager that I want to works as a traveling reporter.
I will graduate from the?? university. My major is journalism. Some professors teach me how to rethink unfair thing in society and cultivate the ability of critical thinking. The reason why I pay close attention to observe non-mainstream cultures. I try to approach the way of aborigine’s life- regionalism,and understand what traditional values of aboriginal tribes are. Therefore, a traveling reporter is the foremost job that I want to do after graduation.
In this summer vacation, I got two chances to gain much information about aborigine. I worked as a practical journalist in department of aborigine on public television. I took advantage of this opportunity of adapting the aboriginal life. I arrive in Dulan tribe of Taitung in July. This is an extremely warm Amis tribe. I was very keen on participating their sacrificial rates called Kiruma. It means some aborigines will return to their tribe. They celebrate and revel for three days. I stayed at Dulan temporarily on a journey several days. I found I could not only get along with the local inhabitants but also felt their innocent and warm spirit without any selfishness. They identify their traditional cultures. I have been attracted to their traditional cultures. That small tribe contains natural atmosphere affect me deeply.
Although their residential hometown has been polluted by visitors and businessman, all aborigines who live in Dulan still think Taiwan is a wonderful landscapes to live. I find it difficult to prevent their residential hometown from visitor and businessman. However, If I have the opportunity of being a traveling reporter in the near future, I will devote myself to writing copious articles and urging people to protect aboriginal tribe’s land.
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Eva, You have a lot of work to do. I will correct the first couple of paragraphs and then you can see what I have done. Then you can correct the remaining paragraphs, ok?
- Eva, You have a lot of work to do.
- I will correct the first couple of paragraphs and then you can see what I have done.
- Then you can correct the remaining paragraphs, ok?
- My changes will be in capital letters.
- MountainHiker This is my self introducTion If you find something wrong in my POST, please correct IT.
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Eva,
You have a lot of work to do.
I will correct the first couple of paragraphs and then you can see what I have done. Then you can correct the remaining paragraphs, ok?
My changes will be in capital letters.
MountainHiker
This is my self introducTion
If you find something wrong in my POST, please correct IT. Thank you very much
You have a lot of work to do.
I will correct the first couple of paragraphs and then you can see what I have done. Then you can correct the remaining paragraphs, ok?
My changes will be in capital letters.
MountainHiker
This is my self introducTion
If you find something wrong in my POST, please correct IT. Thank you very much
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hello! At first I want to say sorry for mistakes and then I want to congratulated you, because you find you as a jurnalist. I am jurnalist too, but I dont work as a jurnalist. I want to know where are you from? I have a friend her name is Eva, too. If you know the version of story maybe legend about Lilit and Eva told me, if you don't know I can told you my version.
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