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Kk Posted 22 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Thank you for checking my self intriduction

hello, if you find something worng in my title, help to revise.
Thank you very much

My name is CHEN WANG-CHUN. I am a senior of ShihHsin University. I major in department of journalism. I am the youngest one in our family. My father is a labor who works in building. My mother runs a stall on a prosperous street. My elder brother works as a mechanic in plastic factory.
Unlike other classmates, I am a transfer student. I was a five-year student of technique school before enrolling ShihHsin University. I majored in electron in technique school, but I wasn’t interested in it. Thus, I decided to take an exam of university transfer. Fortunately, I passed it after poring on my books.
Being a student in technique school, I went to school everyday and tried not to skip classes, but my attitude toward studying was like fishing in the troubled waters. The reason why I didn’t imagine that I can be a university student. However, I passed the exam, and I have to grasp a unique opportunity to acquire further knowledge. The knowledge not only cultivates my critical thinking but also open my eyes. I have been studying at university for more than two years. I found attending university is vital process for my whole life.
I will graduate from ShihHsin University next June. It is about time I have to think what to do in the near future. I have decided to study abroad after contemplating. Before studying in the United States, I must get high scores on TOEFL and GRE’S examination. Besides school’s homework, I learn English day and night. I find it difficult for non-native English speaker to master English very well. I told myself if I want to study in America and survive, I will have to overcome language barrier. Even though there will many gigantic challenges wait for me to encounter, I am full of confidences to accept and overcome them. Only through surmounting all blocks I will run into, can I become a worthy man.
  

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kk, Rather than giving us a bunch of your essays to fix, why don't we focus on one essay at a time? Please Thank you for checking my tite and view this post. Which of these two posts do you want to focus on?

  • kk, Rather than giving us a bunch of your essays to fix, why don't we focus on one essay at a time?
  • Please Thank you for checking my tite and view this post.
  • Which of these two posts do you want to focus on?
  • Helping people with their writing- especially if their writing is poor -is a very time and labor intensive task.
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kk,

Rather than giving us a bunch of your essays to fix, why don't we focus on one essay at a time?

Please Thank you for checking my tite and view this post. Which of these two posts do you want to focus on?

Helping people with their writing-especiall
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hello MountainHiker
I am kk. I apoligize to you for two self introduction titles.
MY classmate's is EVA, MY name is ****-CHUN.
I mean these are different titles.
I apologize for the your inconvenience.
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Hi kk,
My name is CHEN ****-CHUN. I am a senior of ShihHsin University. I major in department of journalism. I am the youngest one in our family. My father is a labor who works in building. My mother runs a stall on a prosperous street. My elder brother works as a mechanic in plastic factory.
Unlike other classmates, I am a transfer student. I was a five-year student of tech
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0 Hi KK, I am a communication student at the University of the Philippines. Based on what I've learned from my course, if u have to write an essay, make an outline first. Follow the clear and effective writing technique like shorten your sentences, have unity and coherence, etc. One thought one sentence, one idea one paragraph. Before u go to another paragraph, you must make a transition fro
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hi your introduction is rocking

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