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When I was a student at five-year technical, I took exercise, basketball, every day. Once thought of as an important part of my life, playing basketball has been far to me due to studying. Especially, to prepare TOEFL, I have never touched it in recent months. In the meanwhile, I ever tried to play, but I always felt if I did this for two hours, I will feel guilty about waste of two hours what I can make use of to write a composition or do something related to TOEFL.

It is difficult for me to do not only studying hard but also taking exercise.In other words, I should sacrifice either studying hard or taking exercise.I don’t find my concept is wrong until my close friend of study group tell me that Aristotle ever said it is exercise that helps people keep their mind on something. This is the reason why people in ancient Greece had to master both the pen and the sword. This theory is similar to Confucianism in china.

So seriously do I take TOEFL that I am going to be a nerd.
Hence, I am thus inclined to say that what enables me most in study is exercise. Only by constant exercise can I realize how to concentrate on studying. As is known, the more exercise we take up, the easier it is for us to maintain healthy bodies.

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I handed in my final last week.
Can you please tell me what I did wrong.
I failed the english 101 class.

Homeless Past and Present

In reading several sources fo information I have noticed a serious problem of homelessness which has progress from past to present continuously increasing daily. Homelessness is a difficult problem which would include everyone to help the situation;it is too much for one person to handle. I would like to explore some areas of why homelessness is a problem. These issues could be racially motivated, financial, and no social suport from friendsor family that could result in homelessness.

For instaance during 1033 Mayor F. LaGuardia assisted in many areas one area he covered was homelessness. Mayor LaGuardia concentrated on the well being of people's lives, which consumed his thoughts of helping families function properl in order to maintain life as a human being in society. His greatest accomplish for the people of that time. Some needed housing in abundance; people were actually living n the streets of New York City. Mayor LaGuardia was very upset with the quality of life in the country he vowed to help the people in his time. Mny families could not support themselves with limitatin resources other choice sleeping in the streets, sometimes accompanied with other family members. Only to be faced with unhealthy living conditions and the end result was that the families did not have money to support themselves to address the issues of thir families.

Racial Motivation

In the past racial motivation was one of the causes of no housing for the people in our past historical resources which could be examined in the current time. In the 1900's the people of color had come a long waqy but was still experienceing difficulty in the area of housing. For instance Mayor LaGuardia dealt with issue of racially motivated issue of his time such as the Harlem Riots which existed in the 1931's and the 1940's.

"Probably no individual could have calmed the ethnic and racial tensins of the 193s nd the 1940s, which were exacerbated by such factors as the depression, ethnic succession, Nazism, Coughlin-inspired anti-Semitism, and World War II."(173)

The past does influenc the future of the world we live in currently the Homelessness is stilla problem in th world we live in. Presently there is a big but, not demanding as resulting inthe streets but, a chronic problem in society. Now in society the peiple have an option to live in the shelter system in our time. Racially motivated situations of the past were existing because of no choice because the time that existed. We have come a long way with racially mediated situatuons they still do exist but not in dominating ways. Now, what we are experiencing a class classification that happens to be radically motivated.

"TheNational surveyfound that 34 percent of homeless service users are member of homeless families. Key characteristics of parents in homeless families include:
* 84 percenty are female and 16 percent are male.
* 38 percent are white non-Hispanic, 43 percent are black non-Hispanic, 15 pwrcent are Hispanic, 3 percent are Native American and 1 pwrcent is other races...."(53)
The problem still exist but in a different way I believe is by classification that involves largest to the smallest but at least it is being reveled that everyone suffers from homelessness.

Financial

In the past financial resources or leak of prestige would be a reason for people without financies to take care fo themselves tokeep housing for their families. Some people dod not have the money or man power to make a better living that would inmprove their futures. In the past money was a key also for people to live in th e worlf with their families. Another area that Mayor LaGuardia did take care of for the people who were less fortunate in the 1900s. Many people did suffer because money was the basic source of survival

Well, I will stop there for now to give you an idea, I can not figure out my I cannot wite properly, it is very frustrating. Please help! I don't believe I deserved a F because of completing the assignments, but I understand because I failed the mid-term and the final.
Can you give me some advice.

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