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Kk Posted 22 years ago
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i have written some paragraphs, please,help to correct the structure of wrong sentences.

Evaluating the pros and cons of Randall's Lab, I am thus inclined to say that Randall's Lab is a great resource for English learning .It provides a free educational listening web site to thousands of visitors around the world. User can download all that in the website.

This website possesses a main trait that it focuses mainly on listening comprehension. In my opinion, it should be designed for non-native English speaker to practice their listening comprehension. In other words, it aims to provide English learner with opportunities for practicing their listening comprehension.

Its content is divided into four levels containing easy, medium, difficult,
and very difficult. Each level is separated into different subjects. Therefore, user can choose specific subject they would like to listen.

As a matter of fact, it provides user with questions, quiz script, and explanation of answers. After taking a test, user would know how much content they understood immediately.
  

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One tip for you, you need to use the plural when you are talking about all the speakers, users and visitors to the website. 'Users can download' rather than 'user can download'. ' and so on but I would change to the plurals.

  • One tip for you, you need to use the plural when you are talking about all the speakers, users and visitors to the website.
  • 'Users can download' rather than 'user can download'.
  • ' and so on but I would change to the plurals.
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One tip for you, you need to use the plural when you are talking about all the speakers, users and visitors to the website.
'Users can download' rather than 'user can download'.

Unless you want to change the structure a bit and say 'The user can...' and so on but I would change to the plurals.
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hi nona the brit, thank you
I think my writing skill is not good. Therefore,i hope you might give me more suggestions on my title.
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Do you mean you want suggestions for a title for your essay?
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hello
Can you tell me how to improve this essay. i think the essay is not good.
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Try following my suggestion and sorting out the plurals you are missing and I think you will find it improves a lot.

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