Some changes have been made to the paragraph. ) Both are OK.
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Anonymous(b.t.w, should one say "the appropriate way to express, or the appropriate way of expressing"..?)Both are OK.
AnonymousI wish to write someone that I have put some changes into a written paragraph, in a passive tense.If I received something like that, I would feel that you were trying to avoid taking responsibility for your actions.