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Chevy Bel Air 01 Posted 19 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Textcorrection please, it must not be perfect.

Of course, I know that Israel is fulfilling the high living standards. As evidence you can consider the highly developed Military.
From you the abovementioned facilities are just material things and do not predicate of candour. The Arab people have no reason to be lucky just because the Israel government allow them to live in a wealthy country. You can not speak from luck, where the Arabs are abhorred by the majority of Israelis and where they are not welcome.
I shortly want to put myself in an Arab’s position: At about 6 o’clock he woke up. He dressed his clothes and shortly afterwards he was on way to work. On the way to his place of work he was thinking about the news from Gaza-Strip (shortly he will get his news). When he sat on the bus he was reading the Ha’aretz. The front page with the headline as usual is “two Israeli soldiers died in Gaza-Strip offensive”. Moreover, an author summed up this awful event with big printed letters: “extreme right wing Moslems fired from ambush at young Israeli soldiers” that was the reason why civilian around the area lost their live, according to the author. But, in fact the Israeli armaments became emotional an opened fire on Palestinian people in the area because they feared another attacks, whatever. That not be mentioned. However, he began to work, but he feared his pause at 12 o’clock. I do not need to mention, why? He went to break hall with trembling legs and immediately he has been spoken to by some colleagues who hold a newspaper in the hand. The Arab had luck, as the mentioned topic was sport. As reaction he only laughed.
Finally, which Nations are represented in Israel?

  

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Of course , I know that Israel is fulfilling the high living standards. As evidence you can consider the highly developed Military. From you the abovementioned facilities are just material things and do not predicate of candour.

  • Of course , I know that Israel is fulfilling the high living standards.
  • As evidence you can consider the highly developed Military.
  • From you the abovementioned facilities are just material things and do not predicate of candour.
  • The Arab people have no reason to be lucky just because the Israel government allow them to live in a wealthy country.
  • You can not speak from luck, where the Arabs are abhorred by the majority of Israelis and where they are not welcome.
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Of course, I know that Israel is fulfilling the high living standards. As evidence you can consider the highly developed Military.
From you the abovementioned facilities are just material things and do not predicate of candour. The Arab people have no reason to be lucky just because the Israel government allow them to live in a wealthy country. You can not speak f
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must not be perfect - that means you want it to contain some errors. Errors are compulsory!

Need not be perfect - that means you don't mind if there are still a few errors.

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