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Sun 94 Posted 16 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
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If you find any problems in the following sentences, can I have your comments? Thanks in advance.
( In the classroom, teacher talks to students)
Considering the fact most lectures are based on the materials provided in a textbook, it will help your learning if you have a better idea on the textbook you are working with. I mean, if you know how the textbook is organized and what information you can find through each part of textbook, such as golossay or index, it will be a great help. So , we will have some time to find out more about the textbook through the exercise on page XX.
( In the classroom, teacher talks to students)
Considering the fact most lectures are based on the materials provided in a textbook, it will help your learning if you have a better idea on the textbook you are working with. I mean, if you know how the textbook is organized and what information you can find through each part of textbook, such as golossay or index, it will be a great help. So , we will have some time to find out more about the textbook through the exercise on page XX.
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I would make a few changes for spelling or grammar. I have crossed out words in the original text and added new language in boldface, as follows: Considering the fact that most lectures are based on the materials provided in a textbook, it will help your learning if you have a better idea on about the textbook you are working with. I mean, if you know how the textbook is organized and what information you can find through out each part of the textbook, such as golossay the glossary or index, it will be a great help.
- I would make a few changes for spelling or grammar.
- I have crossed out words in the original text and added new language in boldface, as follows: Considering the fact that most lectures are based on the materials provided in a textbook, it will help your learning if you have a better idea on about the textbook you are working with.
- I mean, if you know how the textbook is organized and what information you can find through out each part of the textbook, such as golossay the glossary or index, it will be a great help.
- So , we will have some time to find out more about the textbook through the exercise on page XX.
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I would make a few changes for spelling or grammar. I have crossed out words in the original text and added new language in boldface, as follows:
Considering the fact that most lectures are based on the materials provided in a textbook, it will help your learning if you have a better ideaon about the textbook you are working with. I mean, if you know ho
Considering the fact that most lectures are based on the materials provided in a textbook, it will help your learning if you have a better idea
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