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Carlossilveira Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

Text review

Hello! I am a Brazilian Game Developer.
Can anyone read a text I wrote?
I need to know if there's anything weird to a native English speaker.
Can I post it here?
  

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If you are going to sell your games for profit, you should employ a professional proofreader/copy editor.

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If you are going to sell your games for profit, you should employ a professional proofreader/copy editor.
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carlossilveiraCan I post it here?
Yes, and people will help you with the grammar. But what you post, Google will find....
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No, it's no like that.
I just need to answer and e-mail.

Now you can avoid attacks jumping backwards, forwards, to the right or to the left, you can use your shield and attack in so many ways, sword, spells, bow, bombs…
This kind of fight system is so complex, that even today there is not too many games that use it. Normally when this kind of system it is used the game become a hu
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Here are some suggestions. There were a few places that I did not understand, but assumed what you meant.

Now you can avoid attacks by jumping backwards, forwards, to the right or to the left, and you can use your shield and attack in so many ways: with a sword or a bow, casting or deflecting spells or bombs…
This kind of fight system is so complex,
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OMG! You are the best! =*
Lag is latency. But we just say lag.
Thank you very very much!
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