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IcedOut Posted 18 years ago
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0Prompt/Topic relating to the Novel Titled "1984" by George Orwell:02br
00 How can Winston be considered a heroic figure? What qualities does he possess that could define him as one?02br
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00Please comment on your, 00criticism and also any ideas/improvements you would like to make! 05002br
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00Thanks 010id131cMy Response (It's in an image form)srchttp://img364.imageshack.us/img364/9599/57312509zq8.jpg
  

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0Hi, 02br 02br 00I can't read the attachment because the writing is small and faint. Please paste the text into your post here. 02br 02br 00Clive 050010id1

  • 0Hi, 02br 02br 00I can't read the attachment because the writing is small and faint.
  • Please paste the text into your post here.
  • 02br 02br 00Clive 050010id1
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0Hi, 02br
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00I can't read the attachment because the writing is small and faint. Please paste the text into your post here. That will make edits easier, and will encourgae people to try to help you.02br
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00Clive 050010id1
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1b00Hey Clive,02b02br
01b00Thanks for the quick prompt, the image can be enlarged if you click on it once, it is automatically enlarge but never the less; heres my arguement:02b02br
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0Hi,02br
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00Here are a few suggested edits.02br
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01font01b00How can Winston be considered a heroic figure? What qualities does he possess that could define him as one?02b02font02br
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00Heroism is a qualitative term that evidently has several meanings. These can be separated

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