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Apple file 494 Posted 6 years ago
Grammar

Text Proofreading 1

Yes. If I wrote:

"Prevention and protection measures and company organization concerning the workers' health"
Has the phrase a sense in English and is it grammatically correct now?

  

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apple file 494 Has the phrase a sense in English It's unclear. If the paragraph discusses the Human Resources department and its functions related to health and safety, then these are better: Human Resources departments' responsibilities for employees' health and safety Corporate structures that promote and protect workers' safety and well-being.

  • apple file 494 Has the phrase a sense in English It's unclear.
  • If the paragraph discusses the Human Resources department and its functions related to health and safety, then these are better: Human Resources departments' responsibilities for employees' health and safety Corporate structures that promote and protect workers' safety and well-being.
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apple file 494Has the phrase a sense in English

It's unclear.

If the paragraph discusses the Human Resources department and its functions related to health and safety, then these are better:

  • Human Resources departments' responsibilities for employees' health and safety
  • Corporate structures that promote and protect workers' safety an

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