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Musicgold Posted 18 years ago
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00Royal Bank of 010200 today issued a bearish outlook for global stock and credit markets. RBS expect S&P 500, a proxy for global equities, 00 00to drop by almost 25% from the current levels, and credit spreads – reflecting risk aversion of debt investors- to widen significantly during the next three months. The main factors behind this bleak view are the worsening credit crisis that is plaguing the global economy, and the rising risk of inflation.02br
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00The spike in oil and food prices is driving inflation up across the global economy, which has already been going down the road of recession thanks to the credit contagion spreading across developed and emerging markets. Further worsening the situation is the fact that the central bank is helpless in this situation as its favorite tool to stimulate the economy – reducing interest rates- can not work this time around as that risks fueling further inflation. 02br
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0 01blockquote 01cite 10Musicgold12cite 10Hi Mucisgold12br 10I am not sure if this helps:12br 10Royal Bank of Scotland today issued a bearish outlook for global stock and credit markets. RBS expect S&P 500, a proxy for global equities, 10 10to drop by 11del 10almost12del 10 25% from the current level11del 11b 10s12b 12del 10, and credit spreads 11b 10–which 12b 10reflects10 risk aversion of debt investors10-10 to widen significantly during the next three months. 12br 12br 12br 10The spike in oil and food prices is driving inflation up across the global economy10,10 (10not needed)10 which 10in turn10 has 11del 10already12del 10 spawned11del 10 10been going down the road of12del 10 recessions10,10 thanks to the credit contagion spreading across developed and emerging markets.

  • 0 01blockquote 01cite 10Musicgold12cite 10Hi Mucisgold12br 10I am not sure if this helps:12br 10Royal Bank of Scotland today issued a bearish outlook for global stock and credit markets.
  • RBS expect S&P 500, a proxy for global equities, 10 10to drop by 11del 10almost12del 10 25% from the current level11del 11b 10s12b 12del 10, and credit spreads 11b 10–which 12b 10reflects10 risk aversion of debt investors10-10 to widen significantly during the next three months.
  • 12br 12br 12br 10The spike in oil and food prices is driving inflation up across the global economy10,10 (10not needed)10 which 10in turn10 has 11del 10already12del 10 spawned11del 10 10been going down the road of12del 10 recessions10,10 thanks to the credit contagion spreading across developed and emerging markets.
  • 10The10 further worsening 10of10 the situation 10is due to10 the fact that 10T10he 10C10entral 10B10ank 10has been10 11del 10is12del 10 helpless 11del 10in this situation12del 10 as its favorite tool to stimulate the economy,10(comma)10 10which is to reduce th10e10 11del 10reducing12del 10 interest rates10-10 10has10 10failed to10 11del 10can not12del 10 work this time around as that 10may likely10 11del 10risk10s10 fueling12del 10 further 10fan10 inflation.
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01cite10Musicgold12cite10Hi Mucisgold12br
10I am not sure if this helps:12br
10Royal Bank of Scotland today issued a bearish outlook for global stock and credit markets. RBS expect S&P 500, a proxy for global equities, 10 10to drop by 11del10almost12del10 25% from the current lev
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00Thanks a lot. 02br
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00The spike in oil and food prices is driving inflation up across the global economy00,00 (00not needed)00 which 00in turn00 has 01del00already02del00 spawned01del00 00been going down the road of02del00 recessions00,00 tha

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