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0 Lo siento pero hablo muy poco español. 02br
00but the English is fine.050010id1

0 Muchas gracias! 02br
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00I am doubting about 'Condition of the roads'. Is this gramatically 100% correct? 02br
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00And if somebody else does spot a mistake, don't hesitate to mention this! 0-

0 Okay, I received the following suggestions but I'm not 100% sure what's better. Here are the options: 02br
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00(keywords describing webpage -- see link above) 02br
001. Condition of the roads, car rental companies, bus schedules, airplane fares, and more. 02br
002. Roads' condition, car rental companies, bus schedules, airplane fares, and more. 0

0 anybody...? 0-

0 Hi p-nica! 02br
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00You could re-arrange the transport information as follows: 02br
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00Know more about the latest Air Travel fares, Bus schedules, Car rental companies and the condition of the roads. 0-

0 Thanks benita! 02br
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00In order to have this sentence in line with the other text, however, I should not start this as a real sentence I guess (it's merely just a list of what's on that particular page). I could rewrite your text to this: 02br
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00"Air travel fares, bus schedules, car rental companies, and the condition of the roads" 02br

0 I am a native English speaker. Honest, it's fine. I've seen FAR worse in British newspapers! Any adjustments would simply be "nit-picking". 0-

0 Thanks for replying Eimai. I found out AIRFARES is often used... right? I'm gonna go with this then: 02br
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00'Airfares, bus schedules, car rental companies, and road conditions.' 02br
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00If there is something wrong there please let me know. 0-