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Licinio Posted 14 years ago
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I have a couple more sentences to check, always related to local stones. They somehow leave me dubious as to the smoothness of their flow.

These features result from the consolidation of sludge and slurry made up of tiny fragments, or spicules, of siliceous skeleton organisms such as sponges, the so-called silicosponges.

Whetting by the use of "coti" stones is particularly effective because they are very delicate and smooth, non-invasive or aggressive to the metal, and ensure the blade an unparalleled duration.

A proof of the product’s uniqueness and its rooted tradition is the widespread use of "coti" stones, a cultural habit inseparable from daily life to the point that, kept in stone holders, they often followed the emigrants from our valleys who left for the Americas or Australia.

In the case of direct farming, the use of a whetstone is still recommended to better preserve and maintain efficient the blades of scythes, sickles, etc.
  

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These features result from the consolidation of sludge and slurry made up of tiny fragments, or spicules, of siliceous organisms such as the silicosponges . -- You needn't use 'so-called' since you're writing is directed to fellow scientists. Whetting with "coti" stones is particularly effective because they are very delicate and smooth, non-invasive or aggressive to the metal, and ensure great durability in the blade.

  • These features result from the consolidation of sludge and slurry made up of tiny fragments, or spicules, of siliceous organisms such as the silicosponges .
  • -- You needn't use 'so-called' since you're writing is directed to fellow scientists.
  • Whetting with "coti" stones is particularly effective because they are very delicate and smooth, non-invasive or aggressive to the metal, and ensure great durability in the blade.
  • A proof of the material’s uniqueness and its rooted tradition is the widespread use of "coti" stones, a cultural habit so inseparable from daily life that, kept in stone holders, they often followed the emigrants who left our valleys for the Americas or Australia.
  • In farming , the use of a whetstone is still recommended to better preserve and maintain the efficiency of scythes, sickles , and other blades.
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These features result from the consolidation of sludge and slurry made up of tiny fragments, or spicules, of siliceous organisms such as the silicosponges. -- You needn't use 'so-called' since you're writing is directed to fellow scientists.

Whetting with "coti" stones is particularly effective because they are very delicate and smooth, non-invasive or aggressi

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