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While attending primary school, I showed a talent for sport activities, Art and English language. I took part in many competitions and achieved noticeable results because of which I was highly esteemed by teachers and classmates. I also acquired a good knowledge in different subjects and became one of the best pupils in my generation. Besides school activities I was also interested in skiing, dancing and karate where I showed a great talent and skill, took part in different competitions, won numerous diplomas and medals. I was especially successful in karate where I showed the greatest ability and interest, won several first prizes and was one of the best sportswomen. Not only did I win first prizes at competitions I spent some time coaching other competitors and advising them how to achieve noticeable results too.

By enrolling one of the most distinguished High schools in my town I faced new challenges which included participation in language competitions, organizing charities and UNESCO membership. Because of my communication skills, understanding and listening to other pupils I was elected president of my class every year. This enabled me to become a member of the School Parliament where I could present my ideas regarding the progress of the school. In order to improve my English and German knowledge I decided to spend summer holidays in London and Berlin.

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Ema