Hello everybody, can someone please correct my short text below, it´s for my bachelor thesis.
"This thesis contains the text analysis according to Kirsten Adamzik, the translation into German, compliant to the translation order, and the corresponding commentary of both the French texts, Comment les autistes nous voient and L'autisme infantile : l'enfant et sa bulle, as well as a self written introduction to those."
Thanks in advance.
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" I don't know the details o what you are doing, but this sounds better to me. " What does the underlined part mean? Perhaps say it another way.
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" I don't know the details o what you are doing, but this sounds better to me.
" What does the underlined part mean?
Perhaps say it another way.
Has your University got standard ways of writing the names of authors and their works?
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"This thesis contains the text analysis according to Kirsten Adamzik, the translation into German, compliant to the translation order, and the corresponding commentary of both the French texts, Comment les autistes nous voient and L'autisme infantile : l'enfant et sa bulle, as well as a self written introduction to those."