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Hi, help needed. Please check my sentence below. Is this grammatically correct?
When Faz runs away to Jakarta in pursuit of Zehan, Chauly’s gang nabs Faz upon her arrival. Now, Faz’s three brothers joined hands in search of their sister from Bangkok to Jakarta with Zehan help.
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When Faz runs away to Jakarta in pursuit of Zehan, Chauly’s gang nabs Faz upon her arrival. Now, Faz’s three brothers have joined hands in search of their sister, from Bangkok to Jakarta with Zehan's help. I normally would not put a comma after "sister," but you want the phrase after it to tell where the search it, not where Faz is from.
- When Faz runs away to Jakarta in pursuit of Zehan, Chauly’s gang nabs Faz upon her arrival.
- Now, Faz’s three brothers have joined hands in search of their sister, from Bangkok to Jakarta with Zehan's help.
- I normally would not put a comma after "sister," but you want the phrase after it to tell where the search it, not where Faz is from.
- It's for clarity.
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When Faz runs away to Jakarta in pursuit of Zehan, Chauly’s gang nabs Faz upon her arrival. Now, Faz’s three brothers have joined hands in search of their sister, from Bangkok to Jakarta with Zehan's help.
I normally would not put a comma after "sister," but you want the phrase after it to tell where the search it, not where Faz is from. It's for clarity.
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