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Chloee Posted 15 years ago
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NS, world-leading manufacturers of unique nanoparticle characterization technology, will be launching (is this tense appropriate here or it is better to write : will launch) two extremely sophisticated nanodevices called NS DT and NS DP. Scientists at NS have developed (or developed?) nanodevices that play major role when the body first detects a virus and can even prevent infection, or are used (I left out the pronoun they and put the comma before or; is this alright?) to speed up drug development process.
Thanks in advance for comments.
Thanks in advance for comments.
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NS, world-leading manufacturers of unique nanoparticle characterization technology, will be launching (This is good) two extremely sophisticated nanodevices called NS DT and NS DP. Scientists at NS have developed (This is good) nanodevices that play a major role when the body first detects a virus and can even prevent infection . They are also used (You left out too much and tried to put too much in one sentence) to speed up the drug development process.
- NS, world-leading manufacturers of unique nanoparticle characterization technology, will be launching (This is good) two extremely sophisticated nanodevices called NS DT and NS DP.
- Scientists at NS have developed (This is good) nanodevices that play a major role when the body first detects a virus and can even prevent infection .
- They are also used (You left out too much and tried to put too much in one sentence) to speed up the drug development process.
- CJ
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NS, world-leading manufacturers of unique nanoparticle characterization technology, will be launching (This is good) two extremely sophisticated nanodevices called NS DT and NS DP. Scientists at NS have developed (This is good) nanodevices that play a major rol
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