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Mezzopiano Posted 8 years ago
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Hi, could you correct these two sentences for me ?

He sat there alone and slowly drank his coffee while everyone had to do their job, watching the road filled with people, didn't care about anything

  

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He sat there alone and slowly drank his coffee while everyone else had to do their job. Watching the road filled with people, he didn't care about anything.

  • He sat there alone and slowly drank his coffee while everyone else had to do their job.
  • Watching the road filled with people, he didn't care about anything.
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He sat there alone and slowly drank his coffee while everyone else had to do their job. Watching the road filled with people, he didn't care about anything.

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